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Array ( [sid] => 10000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Thoughts Of Suicide [time] => 2003-01-08 16:20:00 [hometext] => This poem holds many of my inner feelings and is most likely the most truthful piece I have written..

-Chanti* [bodytext] => Maybe ill be dead tomorrow,
but tell me, would u even care,
theres no reason for living,
when no one wants me there,
i cant believe im saying it,
but God, just take me now,
or if theres a way to make it,
send me a message, how?
no one even loves me,
doesnt a person need to be loved,
why dont people love me,
thats all i can think of,
death is holding my hand,
and pulling me so close,
i do not want to die,
but thats the path ive chose,
for, i just cannot live,
in a world with so much hate,
everyone is so fickle,
so suicide must be my fate,
no one understands,
they think im so happy,
they think that im so joyful,
whenever they see me,
but they dont know im dying,
they are oblivious to see,
that inside, my heart and soul is dying,
Perhaps, Soon,
Ill be in a place where i can be Free. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Thoughts Of Suicide

Contributed by Chanti on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Maybe ill be dead tomorrow,
but tell me, would u even care,
theres no reason for living,
when no one wants me there,
i cant believe im saying it,
but God, just take me now,
or if theres a way to make it,
send me a message, how?
no one even loves me,
doesnt a person need to be loved,
why dont people love me,
thats all i can think of,
death is holding my hand,
and pulling me so close,
i do not want to die,
but thats the path ive chose,
for, i just cannot live,
in a world with so much hate,
everyone is so fickle,
so suicide must be my fate,
no one understands,
they think im so happy,
they think that im so joyful,
whenever they see me,
but they dont know im dying,
they are oblivious to see,
that inside, my heart and soul is dying,
Perhaps, Soon,
Ill be in a place where i can be Free.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-01-08 16:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Thoughts Of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 04:34:25 PM AEST
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You know there was a time when i was a little girl that i used to pray that god would take my life....it was real sad and i asked him later in life after i grew up to take my life as well...but one thing i've realized is that even when we feel that nobody cares about us and when nothing ever seems to go right in our lives....just keep in mind that your death would hurt and affect so many people in life, there are people who love and care for you, don't over look who they are.....my heart bleeds for you my friend that you feel this way......may peace lay upon your soul....This poem hit home with me...keep writing my friend...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: The Thoughts Of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 04:44:13 PM AEST
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this is beautiful...i am right there with you, hang on...

Re: The Thoughts Of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:41:02 PM AEST
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Hey, Chanti I appreciate your honesty sometimes living can be hard when we think no one cares, but let it be known that I care andso do many other ppl. i liked this keep up your amazing poems

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The Thoughts Of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Killer on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:00:44 AM AEST
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Wow, what a powerful poem... this describes exactly how I get to feelin' sometimes... keep up the great work and hang in there.

Re: The Thoughts Of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Eloise on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:23:48 AM AEST
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i used to pray that i would die.. i even tried to take my own life... but when i think about it now, i cant believe how close i came to throwing everything i have away....

Re: The Thoughts Of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_star_angel on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 07:31:41 PM AEST
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I understand how you may be feeling, I've thought of suicide, too. At times, it comes back to me. A very deep poem. Hopefully, things will get better for you. I'll be here if you need someone to talk to. I usually talk to someone, and it lifts some of the pain. I'll be right here, ok?

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